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Thursday 24 October 2013

Narrative Recont


On a HOT summer Dan and his family are going on a fun trip to the hottest beach on earth.Dan get your swim gear said dad.So I packed my stuff and off we went,Dan and his little sister were playing a game to keep them selfs company.



I spy something with my little eyes something that is blue said mandy.”Ummm the blue ocean said Dan.Yeah thats right how did you know that said mandy.How far is the beach said mum,Only like about a few minutes.Dan and mandy fell asleep.



“Beep Beep we are here said dad”.wow it looks beautiful said mandy.Go hop in the water watch out it might be cold.The water was cold as tap water,Mandy want to make a sandcastle said dan.Ok then i will get the bucket,some seashells and some water for the castle.



Go and get some seashells and put it on the top ok mandy.so they had put layers of sand around the castle and some seashells on the top for decoration.”done yelled dan.Ok then time to go home now saygood bye to your castle.


The ride home was a long trip but we had fun.When we got home we had hot delicious chocolate with some cookies before bed.Ok time for bed,night mum and dad.THE END     

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