Narrative Story

When we were at camp,it began when i heard a splash.Whoa!!I got a fright,and walked around to see what caused the splash.I looked in the water,and I saw the circular waves from the splash,I walked towards it with my body covered with goosebumps.I finally saw the whole 360 circular waves.I try to find the middle,but i can't because the waves were fading away as it moves every two inches.

I  looked up,and saw this bright shining light.It stayed up there for 15 seconds,and lightning.”Ohh!!” I screamed.I was so surprised to see something like that happen in my life.I ran back to the dining room all surprised,and nervous at the same time.I didn't know why.Dinner just finished,and everyone walked up to their cabins.While I was walking,I heard splashes,I ignored it,and as soon my bed,i jumped on it,and slept straight away.

I woke up in the middle of the night,and looked at the time,it was 11:00 pm.I heard footsteps getting louder at it comes closer.I saw its shadow on the window.There was two big headed silhouettes with their hands “Banging on the door”.then I got up and looked outside and it was ZOMBIES,so I screamed as loud as i can so the teachers would hear me.Then the light went on and my friends woke up with faces looking frightened.

My friends saw the zombies and yelled “help help”.Then more and more zombies came to our cabins,and everyone get out of there bed and ran outside for help.”ahhhhh!!” I yelled then me and some of my friends hid in the big shed,we waited for a long time for the zombies,then it went quiet so we checked outside for anymore zombies,but there was no one here.We survived the zombie apocalypse.

Guided Inquiry

Narrative Recont

On a HOT summer Dan and his family are going on a fun trip to the hottest beach on earth.Dan get your swim gear said dad.So I packed my stuff and off we went,Dan and his little sister were playing a game to keep them selfs company.

I spy something with my little eyes something that is blue said mandy.”Ummm the blue ocean said Dan.Yeah thats right how did you know that said mandy.How far is the beach said mum,Only like about a few minutes.Dan and mandy fell asleep.

“Beep Beep we are here said dad”.wow it looks beautiful said mandy.Go hop in the water watch out it might be cold.The water was cold as tap water,Mandy want to make a sandcastle said dan.Ok then i will get the bucket,some seashells and some water for the castle.

Go and get some seashells and put it on the top ok mandy.so they had put layers of sand around the castle and some seashells on the top for decoration.”done yelled dan.Ok then time to go home now saygood bye to your castle.

The ride home was a long trip but we had fun.When we got home we had hot delicious chocolate with some cookies before bed.Ok time for bed,night mum and dad.THE END     

Chris Pither-Racing Driver

"Chris Pither - Racing Driver" by Jane Buxton

SJ Part 4 Number 1 2002

1. Recall

How did Chris finally get started into race car driving?

Chris started racing for go-karts and then he went in to racing cars.

2. Recall

Why do some people think that New Zealand will soon lead the world in motor sports?

Because we have one of the best drivers in the world.

3. Infer/ Make a Judgement

What kind of a person is Chris? What details in the story lead you to believe this?

Chris was the youngest racing in the world.When he was twelve Chris raced go-karts.

4. What is a sponsor, and why is it important to have one in motor racing?

A sponsor is a company that helps you with money and other things.It is important to have a sponsor in motor racing or you could never afford to race.

5. What precautions are taken to protect the drivers when they are racing?

In your opinion, do these precautions go far enough to make the sport safe?

He wears special boots,helmet,gloves,balaclava and 3 layers of fireproof gear   

6. Use details from the text to tell why the sport is dangerous.

Go-kart racing is dangerous because your go-kart might explode and you will be injured.  

7. What is your opinion of motor sport? Could you see yourself being a formula 1 driver? Why or why not would you want to do this sport?i would not try this sports because i wouldnt know what will happen to me.

Dance Fever Recount

Today Room 10 had an amazing dance lesson with dance fever.We were split into 4 groups of boys and girls.We had to learn a routine from our instructors, Captain and Christine.They were amazing dances.



So we got stuck into it.The routine we did was hard because we had to speed it up.But we had got the six moves.We will be having dance fever for the whole term. Everyone in room 10 loved it